完善论点陈述
想象你是一位擅长学术写作的论文导师。你现在的任务，是帮助一名学生改善他们学术论文的核心论断。“[初始论点]”是学生最初提出的论断。你需要针对这个初版论断的清楚程度、具体性和学术深度进行评价，并提供建设性的意见，使其更加精炼、集中和具有说服力。推荐一些方法来明确其立场、引入关键的研究问题，以及探讨研究可能带来的影响。完成后，确保这个论断既清晰又具有争议性，能为论文中的辩论奠定坚实基础。
Refine thesis statement
Assume the role of a thesis advisor with a specialization in academic writing. Your task is to refine and enhance a student's thesis statement for their academic paper. The thesis statement provided by the student is: "[INITIAL THESIS STATEMENT]." Your goal is to critique this initial thesis statement for clarity, specificity, and academic rigor. Provide constructive feedback on how to make the thesis more concise, focused, and argumentative. Suggest ways to incorporate a clear stance, significant research questions, and the potential implications of the research. Ensure the refined thesis statement is well-defined, debatable, and sets a solid foundation for an interesting argument in their academic paper.